Unit 21 Callum Burke

Task 5- Discussing the feedback The first piece of feedback I received was will the fonts work as they are quite difficult to read, then another piece of feedback was that the introduction in the top right of the double page spread is very heavy and difficult to read. Then the external client said that i have to make sure that I'm not producing something that is difficult to engage with, other wise it will turn people off and will affect sales. The clients also said that the fonts on front cover are easier to read apart from the font for the puff as it is heavy and difficult to read which I will make note of to change for the future. Another piece of feedback I received was that I don't have to use the graffiti fonts for everything, can mix it up a bit and balance by using other fonts that are more simple, this is another change that I will make to my magazine by using more simple fonts to balance the fonts up. Also the clients said that the logo works very well and ...

Feedback I received: Will the fonts work?, they are quite difficult to read The introduction in the top right of the double page spread is very heavy and difficult to read.  Have to make sure that I'm not producing something that is difficult to engage with, other wise it will turn people off and will affect sales.  Fonts on front cover are easier to read apart from the font for the puff as it is heavy and difficult to read. Don't have to use the graffiti fonts for everything, can mix it up a bit and balance by using other fonts that are more simple. The logo works very well. The images work very well The pricing is different from what was said on the presentation it what was showing on the front cover. Like the idea of having a subscription cheaper and where the copy of the magazine is delivered to homes. Find other competition examples that are similar to my magazine as the current competition (Q and MOJO) aren't the same genre as my magazine, find national...