Task 4 Final Pitch




Feedback I received:

  • Will the fonts work?, they are quite difficult to read
  • The introduction in the top right of the double page spread is very heavy and difficult to read.
  •  Have to make sure that I'm not producing something that is difficult to engage with, other wise it will turn people off and will affect sales.
  •  Fonts on front cover are easier to read apart from the font for the puff as it is heavy and difficult to read.
  • Don't have to use the graffiti fonts for everything, can mix it up a bit and balance by using other fonts that are more simple.
  • The logo works very well.
  • The images work very well
  • The pricing is different from what was said on the presentation it what was showing on the front cover.
  • Like the idea of having a subscription cheaper and where the copy of the magazine is delivered to homes.
  • Find other competition examples that are similar to my magazine as the current competition (Q and MOJO) aren't the same genre as my magazine, find national magazines with the same genre.
  • The presentation was very concise. Simple presentations allows for expansion and imagination.





Final Presentation:





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